Sara's Response

Hey Cameron,
You have a very interesting topic. One thing that I would like to see is how you feel about violence in music. You did a great job of mentioning how the people in your articles felt and responded, but I think it's important to mention how you view your topic. Do you think that anything should be done about this? Is it alright to let wealthy, strong kids listen to rap music, but not okay if you live in an underprivileged area with an overworked parent? You did a great job getting the facts down, though. Some of your statistics were really interesting.
Nice Work!
~Sara